A pause for breath

Word lovers (or should that be pedants), particularly those like me who spend much of their time editing, often emphasise the importance of punctuation. The humble comma is a case in point. It may seem small, but it can be vitally important in communicating meaning. Take for example the two sentences ‘Let’s eat, Grandma’ and ‘Let’s eat Grandma.’ There’s a world of difference between the two! That little pause indicated by the comma is key. I used that idea as the springboard for the following reflective prayer, taken from my book Touching the Seasons, which emphasises that we all sometimes need to take a pause for breath, whether in life or in faith.

The comma

Who’d have thought it –
something as small as a comma
making such a difference?
But it did,
the sentence making little sense without it.
It indicated a pause for breath,
small but vital;
that little break key to the whole.

Remind me, Lord, that I need to pause sometimes
if I’m to make sense of life;
time to stop and stare essential
if I’m to keep things in balance
and live as you intend.
In the many demands and duties I face each day,
teach me to make space for stillness and quiet –
space for me and you.
Amen.